How to write an outline for the SAT essay

October 30th, 2010

The SAT essay requires you to produce a 4 or 5 paragraph essay in a mere 25 minutes, a feat you will likely never be called on to repeat again (I can’t remember ever having less than an hour for a college essay test of comparable length). In this painfully short amount of time you will be asked to form an opinion about a topic, come up with two specific examples to support that opinion, and lay out a formal argument for it.

Believe it or not, the best way to ensure that you have time for all of this is to spend 2 or 3 minutes drafting an effective outline.

“But Jesse,” I can already hear you saying, “we only have 25 precious minutes and you want us to waste 2 or 3 of them writing things down that we’re just going to have to write again?! What sort of madness is this?!” Think about it for a second, though.

I’ll bet if you added up all of the time you spent, halfway through a paragraph, tapping your pencil furiously against your desk, bouncing your knee up and down and thinking “Oh geez, oh geez, what to write next?” it would total more than 2 or 3 minutes. A well written outline should eliminate this sort of waste almost entirely and save you time in the long run (not to mention the fact that it will surely prove less annoying to your neighbor).

The trick is, first of all, to remember that no one but you is ever going to see your outline - so write as little as possible as long as you can understand it. If you can write “gdi>sm>psve fc adv” and remember a few minutes later (not the next day or even a few hours later, just a few minutes) that it means “Ghandi’s salt march was an example of perseverance in the face of adversity,” more power to you. (And your teachers told you that all those text-message abbreviations would hurt your writing!)

Second, be sure to write all the important info (your basic position on the question, your two supporting examples, your evidence connecting them to the questions, etc.) and none of the fluff. Feel free to write down information as it comes to you even if it’s not the order in which you want it to appear in the essay. Once again, nobody ever has to look at the outline except you.

Not only will an outline ultimately save you time and ensure that your essay has structure, it will help you produce an essay in which the structure is obvious. Essay graders don’t like to spend a long time poring over your essay and trying to make sense of your unique writing style. They want to be able to plainly see an introduction, thesis statement, body with specific examples, and conclusion within a 30 second glance at the page. Taking a few minutes to construct an outline before you start writing will help your essay achieve this clarity and structure.

Halloween at Knewton: Angry Chickens, Tanooki Mario, Rex Kwon Do and the GMAT

October 29th, 2010

There are some very strange creatures roaming the halls here at Knewton today. I’m sitting next to a giant jellyfish as we speak.  And I just saw some sort of furry animal with a mustache dash into another room and WHOA there goes a dude who looks like Uncle Sam meets Axl Rose. There’s an angry chicken slicing zucchini bread in the kitchen and the sound of buzzing light sabers is piercing the air. How much coffee did I drink???

No, no, no it’s not the caffeine of course. It’s the Friday before Halloween so we’re having a little fun here at Knewton. Costumes are in full force (may it always be with you) and laughter is at full volume. Everybody stepped up their game because at the end of the day we’ll vote on the best costume and winner gets a sweet new Kindle Wi-Fi. Of course amid all the hoopla we’re still trying to get some work done–it’s been a busy week and we’ve just added a bunch of new features to our GMAT course (not to mention there’s a sweet Halloween discount that ends tomorrow, so get in on it while you can).

Geeks and freaks have got nothing on KNERDS. Have a happy and safe Halloween weekend!

Nate, deep in character as frustration with the  NYC subway system

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Angel interprets the depth and complexity that is “Rex Kwon Do”

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Effie as the lovable Tanooki Mario

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Brad , pushing boundaries here as  Virtual High Five

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Nina as a very Angry Bird

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More to come…..

And the winner will be announced soon!

MBA Admissions Tip: Top 5 Resume Mistakes

October 29th, 2010

This post comes to us from Igor Khayet, President and Founder of My Resume Shop.

As a former admissions interviewer for the Yale School of Management and owner of a career services company, I have seen hundreds of resumes targeted for admission into business school. Sometimes, all it takes to stand out from the crowd is simply avoiding the common pitfalls of bad resume writing. Do not take this process lightly — the resume is the only document in the application that summarizes your entire candidacy. Additionally, most business schools base the admissions interview on the resume and not the entire application.

Here are the 5 most common resume mistakes — and how to avoid them:

1) Focus on Responsibilities

If you have the line “responsible for” in your resume, remove it. Resumes are not about goals, tasks, and responsibilities. Resumes are about achievements. The achievement bullets focus on things you have accomplished as opposed to things you were supposed to accomplish. A good achievement bullet is written in past tense and discusses the context of the situation, what your action was, and the impact it had on the organization (see next paragraph).

2) Lack of Impact

Presented findings to senior managers. Wrote extensive analysis on European Transportation Industry. Participated in monthly project manager meetings. These three examples lack impact, which is critical to writing a great resume. Each bullet should answer not only what you did, but why it matters.  If you presented findings to senior managers, were the recommendations adopted? If you wrote an extensive analysis of the European Transportation Industry, how was the report used within the company or externally? If you participated in monthly project manager meetings, what was your role in the meeting? Great resumes focus on impact!

3) Quantity Over Quality

Most resumes are packed with so much information that it makes it hard for the reader to focus on what is important. Remember that people do not have a lot of time to review each resume and that looking at resume after resume becomes repetitive and boring. Your resume should focus on the quality of information included – not quantity. Three to five bullets per experience that are compelling, descriptive, and show impact are much more impressive than eight one-line bullets that are poorly written and/or do not show impact or clarify the context of the situation.

4) No Story

Your resume is not simply an autobiography of all of the information about you. A good business school resume tells a story of where you have been, what skills you currently possess, and where you want to go in the future. If you are interested in Corporate Social Responsibility but have nothing on your resume that relates to social causes and philanthropy, this will be a tough sell to the admission committee. Do not simply focus on professional work experience, but find other ways to bring out interest such as membership in professional organizations, participation in conferences and workshops, or volunteer work.

5) Aesthetically Unappealing

As a business school applicant, you should already know that presentation matters a lot. The presentation of the resume is no different. A correct use of fonts, styles, and format will make your resume easy to read, and serve as a great marketing tool. Alternatively, crazy fonts and an inconsistent use of style will instantly put you at a disadvantage. One common mistake is having too many section headings that do a poor job organizing the information on your resume. Stick to a simple format of 3 sections: Education, Professional Work Experience, and Additional Information and Skills.

Igor Khayet is the President and Founder of My Resume Shop (www.myresumeshop.com).  He is a former Admissions Interviewer for the Yale School of Management and a current member of the Professional Association of Resume Writers & Career Coaches. Connect with him on Facebook: www.facebook.com/myresumeshop and Twitter: twitter.com/myresumeshop

Knewton Challenge Discussion – GMAT Data Sufficiency (Rembolse Insurance)

October 28th, 2010

This is a Data Sufficiency problem from Session 5, Extra Practice HW 3 (Quantitative Strategy). So far, 49.6% of Knewton students have missed it. How would you approach it?

Try it out, then share your answers, questions, and thought processes in the comments below. Remember, if you’re in our GMAT class now, add your teacher name and session to your comment (e.g., Zwelling, MW 1:30).

In 2001, Rembolse Insurance sold 8,250 travel insurance policies in its international division. If 255 of the international division’s policies resulted in a claim, what was the claim rate, i.e. the number of claims per 100 policies, for the domestic division in 2001?

1. In 2001, the overall claim rate for the international and domestic divisions combined was 4.5 claims per 100 policies.
2. In 2001, the domestic division sold 4,550 policies.

[A] Statement (1) ALONE is sufficient, but statement (2) alone is not sufficient.
[B] Statement (2) ALONE is sufficient, but statement (1) alone is not sufficient.
[C] BOTH statements TOGETHER are sufficient, but NEITHER statement ALONE is sufficient.
[D] EACH statement ALONE is sufficient.
[E] Statements (1) and (2) TOGETHER are NOT sufficient.

College Admissions Tip: 5 reasons not to wait to hear from your top choice school

October 28th, 2010

This week’s college admissions tip comes from our friends at College Essay Organizer.

We see it year in and year out – students put all their eggs in the basket of their dreams, and are then are left with a surprising amount of work to do in just a couple of weeks when they receive the dreaded thin envelope.

We know that when you send out that early application you feel like senior year is finally behind you and senioritis is finally upon you – like it’s time to kick back and put your feet up on your desk. Not so fast. Here are five reasons you might not want to do that just yet:

1.      You have more work to do than you think. What’s rarely discussed in college admissions circles is that college applications, even if you’re using the Common Application, are usually made up of many essays, long and short. The Common App requires a long and short essay and also asks an optional response, but most schools require additional pieces of writing, called supplemental essays. These are often at full essay length – 250 words, 500 words, or more. And you might have quite a few of these.

2.     Finishing the Common Application for one school doesn’t mean you’re finished with them all. Schools throw these supplemental essays at you for many reasons. To differentiate themselves, to point out the qualities they feel are important in their applicants, or even to whittle the application pool down a bit. But the side effect is that when you’re applying to six, eight, ten or even more universities, the amount of writing you may need to do can easily get out of hand, even if all of your schools accept the Common App.

3.     You need to get organized. College Essay Organizer was born out of a simple need our students had – to organize, keep track of, and efficiently answer an ever-growing list of college application essay questions. We saw students chewing up hours and hours each year trying to make sure they had their apps in order. CEO does that work for you, instantly. You get all your application questions in one place, and even get an automated plan for answering all your questions with as few essays as possible.

4.     Scholarship work is specific to each school. Scholarship and departmental applications can be what really chews up time for some students. Schools very rarely share scholarship opportunities, so scholarships that carry their own applications and essays tend to be specific to each school you apply to. These can pile up as well, so making sure you know what you’re up against ahead of time can help you feel a lot less pressure at the end of the year. CEO helps with that too – we show you optional, scholarship, and department-specific essays as well as the ones your schools require for their primary applications.

5.     The holidays can chew up time at the end of the year. So you’ve just gotten the thin envelope. You’re not exactly feeling on top of the world. Then, on top of that, you have holidays, family gatherings, and New Year’s. Not a great time to be buckling down with a laptop and ten essays to write. Make sure you get these things done ahead of time, and even if things don’t go as planned with your top choice, you’ll still be sitting pretty.

CEO has designed an Essay RoadMap preview to help you see (for FREE) how many essays your schools will require. This should help you get started ahead of time and make sure you’re using your time wisely while writing as few essays as possible for all your questions. Good luck with those early apps!

MBA Reading List: "The Lords of Strategy"

October 28th, 2010

Welcome to the first installment of our “Business School Reading List” series. It’s all about recommended reading for prospective MBAs. The books we’ll cover are some of the essential texts for anyone interested in management and entrepreneurship — plus they provide some excellent GMAT-level reading practice!

This week’s pick: The Lords of Strategy by Walter Kiechel III.

Why it’s worth your time

This book is a  must-read for budding consultants out there as well as former McKinseyites and Bainies. Kiechel (former Editorial Director of Harvard Business Publishing) covers the birth of “strategy,” a paradigm so fundamental to business today that we can’t imagine corporate America without it.

What you’ll learn

The origins of an industry. Consultants will be familiar with BCG’s “growth share matrix” and McKinsey’s “7-S framework” and nearly everyone takes for granted the Kiechel’s structuring of the modern business world: as one in which outside parties influence senior leadership and help them gain competitive advantage in their respective spheres. However, Kiechel has a unique grasp on the personal narratives or the cultural climate surrounding the emergence of the multi-billion dollar consulting industry forty years ago.

Background on the big names. Key players in Kiechel’s narrative include Bruce Hendersen (founder of the Boston Consulting Group), Bill Bain (creator of Bain & Company) Fred Gluck (longtime managing partner of McKinsey & Co), and Michael Porter, groundbreaking professor at Harvard Business School. Comprehensive and even dry at a solid 328 pages, the book doubles as a short business history and a strategy textbook which explains concepts involving customer, costs, competition, and human capital.

The limits of one approach. Though Kiechel makes some effort to be even-handed in his assessment and does describe some consulting trends as less useful and more faddish, an underlying admiration for the “lords” shines through his occasional criticism. Chapters which address the role of consulting firms in corporate failures and the current economic crisis are not as comprehensive as one might expect. Reviewers have described the last chapter, “Where Was Strategy When the Global Financial System Collapsed?” as an out-of-place coda or tack-on.

Want to read more?

Those searching for a less scholarly, more critical stance on the value of consultants should look to The Management Myth by Matthew Stewart and debut memoir, House of Lies by Martin Kihn while those looking for general management expertise from former consultants should check out The Alchemy of Growth by Mehrdad Baghai and Creative Destruction by McKinsey veterans Richard Foster & Sarah Kaplan.

One-sentence takeaway

The opening chapters of Lords, which cover the intensification of capitalism and “intellectualization” of management during the latter half of the 20th century, should captivate anyone interested in business, history, or American culture.

Happy reading!

November 2010 SAT: 5 things you can do to prepare in your last week

October 28th, 2010

The November 2010 SAT is coming up next week! So what’s the best way to spend your last few days leading up to the test?

To start, check out our free test week workshops. Then, follow these five tips for exam day readiness:

1. Buddy up

Get together one night during test week (not Friday night!) with a few friends who are also taking the exam and share study tips and strategies. If you can stay focused (perhaps have a parent in the next room) this is a great way to make last minute prep more fun and less stressful. You may even learn a super-helpful new strategy from one of your friends.

2. Take one last test run

Take a practice test early in the week (definitely not Friday night!) under test conditions similar to that of the actual exam (i.e. time yourself and take the test in a quiet room without distractions). Go through each of your wrong answer choices and review the appropriate content that is related to the questions you are getting wrong. Don’t worry about your score on this test — due to stress and other mitigating factors there is a chance it will not be indicative of how you will do this weekend – just use the experience as a study tool.

3. Ask for help!

Everyone can use a little guidance sometimes. Have a specific question in mind that needs answering. Going up to your high school math teacher and saying “I need help with SAT math, what can you tell me?” is not going to go over well (especially the week before the test). However, a question like, “Do you have any advice for approaching questions about x-y planes”  might just get you a helpful response. You can even consulting a parent or an older sibling with questions like “How do you best prepare for a stressful situation?” or “Can you review some vocabulary with me?” Take advantage of all the people around you who are ready and willing to help!

4. Head outside

Get some fresh air and exercise. You want to de-stress your mind and body. Anxiety can be your biggest enemy on test day. Oxygen helps brain function — aerobic exercise is the most effective study break possible. Studies show that 30-40 minutes of exercise can boost performance on mental tasks.

5. Don’t cram

The night before the test, just take care of the practical stuff. Put your exam ticket and other relevant documents someplace safe where you won’t forget them. Plan your travel to the exam center wisely in order to reach the test center well in time. Be sure to get adequate sleep. Prepare breakfast, or at least plan what you will eat (something with a balance of proteins and carbohydrates is best). If you think it will save you time and early morning stress, lay out your clothing the night before. Be sure to dress in layers!

Law School Admissions Tip: Common Recommendation Dilemmas

October 27th, 2010

Every other Wednesday, our friends at Clear Admit will share one of their excellent tips for navigating the law school admissions process. For more advice, be sure to check out their blog.

As many of our readers are aware, letters of recommendation are an important part of the application process. We would like to take a look at how to handle the snags that often arise for applicants in unique academic or employment situations.

Professor or TA? For current undergraduate students at larger universities, one common dilemma is deciding whether to ask one’s professor or TA to serve as a recommender. Although it might be tempting to chose professors, since they are the primary instructor of the classes, if the professor does not know you well, you are better off using your TA. Law schools value recommendations from sources who know applicants well, and therefore even if you have a well-known professor, his or her opinion of you will not be as helpful as a TA’s who can speak knowledgeably about your academic work and potential.

Academic or Work Recommender? For applicants who have been out of work for five years or more, it may be a challenge to find academic recommenders who can still accurately describe the applicant’s abilities. In this situation, law school applications should feel free to use a recommender from their current work. Ideally, this recommender would be someone who has seen the applicant use critical thinking skills, can judge his or her writing ability, and describe the applicant’s potential for success in law school and the legal field – essentially someone who can evaluate the applicant using the same criteria an academic recommender would use.

Good Recommender or Good Writer? One situation law school applicants might find themselves in is that their ideal recommender – a college professor who knows them well – is not the best writer. To ensure that this recommender sends in an effective recommendation, applicants should try to supervise the crafting of the recommendation as much as possible without actually writing it themselves. If this doesn’t work, or applicants think the recommender would be adverse to collaboration, applicants should feel free to find a new recommender – while applicants want recommenders who knows you well, if they cannot express their opinions in an persuasive manner, the ensuing recommendation letters will not be an effective component of the overall application.

We hope this advice helps law school applicants in selecting their recommenders and obtaining insightful, enthusiastic recommendations that bolster their entire applications.

College News Roundup – The Early Decision advantage, college essay tips, and 10 application mistakes to avoid

October 27th, 2010

Those college application deadlines just keep getting closer and closer, don’t they? If you’re overwhelmed by SAT prep, college applications, or endless amounts of homework, take a breather with this week’s College News Roundup.

1. Stanford Admissions Office Moves Forward with Random Audits

Stanford and other universities are cracking down on students who may be lying on their college applications.  These audits are being run to ensure fairness and honesty – but will they do their job?

2. Your Choice of College Virtually in Your Hand

College recruiters are going green and going high-tech.  Using phone apps and social media to connect with prospective students is on the rise.  Read more about this trend in The Record.

3. 10 College Application Mistakes to Avoid

Making sure your essay is error-free is a no-brainer, right?  Still, every year, colleges and universities receive personal statements filled with typos and grammatical errors.  Be sure yours isn’t one of them!  This post on STLToday.com reminds you of what to do (and not to do) for your college application.

4. Going Beyond Cliché: How to Write a Great College Essay

This New York Times post is a good brainstorming exercise if you’re stumped on your college essay topic.

5. The Latest Scoop on College Admissions

This article at bnet.com gives another perspective on the Early Decision factor in college admissions.

MBA Admissions Tip: Interview Etiquette

October 27th, 2010

Here’s another weekly MBA admissions tip from our friends at Clear Admit. For more advice about the b-school application process, check out their blog.

With imminent interview invites for Round One applicants, we wanted to turn our attention to this important step in the admissions process and share a few very basic pointers on interview etiquette. Though the content of your application materials and comments during the interview are of paramount importance, it’s also crucial to put one’s best foot forward and make a positive initial impression. Here are a few guidelines for interviewing applicants to keep in mind:

1) Dress the part. Unless meeting with an alum who explicitly specifies a more casual dress code, assume that business attire is appropriate. We recommend that applicants dress conservatively, opting for a dark suit (pants or skirt are both fine for women) and a blue or white shirt. Steer clear of flashy brand gear and loud ties, and go easy on makeup and fragrances; you want to be remembered for what you say and who you are, not what you wore.

2) Be pleasant. This likely goes without saying, but we wanted to state for the record that in addition to fostering a friendly discussion with your interviewer, it’s also important to be polite to administrative staff and anyone else you might encounter while on campus or in your alumni interviewer’s office. Flippant comments to the administrative assistant at the front desk often find their way up the chain of command.

3) Be aware of body language. In addition to your comments about your experiences, interests and reasons for seeking an MBA, your interviewer will also be taking note of the way you present yourself. You’ll also want to avoid taking notes or reading from your resume; it can be fine to have the latter in front of you as a reference, but remember that you should be familiar enough with its content to focus on maintaining eye contact and establishing a rapport.

4) Follow up. Make sure that you get your interviewer’s card and take his or her contact information in order to send a “thank you” email within 24 hours of the interview. This is not only common courtesy, but could also serve as the first step in forging a lasting correspondence.

While these steps should help readers in one element of their interview presentation, we’ll offer some more content and strategy focused advice next week. Meanwhile, applicants who are curious about what to expect might want to check out the Clear Admit Wiki, which features first-hand accounts of interviews at all of the top programs and the Clear Admit Interview Guides, which offer in-depth, school-specific interview guidance for nearly every leading MBA program.

Good luck to everyone hoping for an interview invite! For personalized interview coaching and school-specific advice, feel free to contact Clear Admit at info@clearadmit.com.